Stacia Kane and Jaye Wells over at the League of Reluctant Adults are holding a dialogue challenge, just for kicks. They offered to read a small exerpt from a limited number of entries (which they maxed out on so don't bombard them with more - sorry) and give their feelings in a tight critique. I managed to slide under the wire and look forward to hear a pros thoughts. Any opinions to help me strengthen my chops are gladly appreciated!

http://www.leagueofreluctantadults.com/blog.html

They're posting four critiques per day through Saturday, and Mark Henry added that he might throw in an opinion or two. Loads of fun!